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Monday, May 11, 2009

The Rengay Form

The rengay is to renga (and other collaborative verse) as the nosegay is to a large wreath of flowers - small, intimate, accessible, and typically lighthearted and joyous.
--Michael Dylan Welch

The North American rengay was invented in 1992 by Garry Gay (ren-Gay). Unlike renga, there are only a few rules:

  1. six haiku verses written by two or more poets;
  2. verses alternate between 3-lines and 2-lines;
  3. each verse should be an independent haiku (including the 2-line verses), though this is the least stringent requirement;
  4. a theme should be followed, but without the tight link and shift patterns in traditional renga.
  • 2 person pattern:
    3 lines, poet A
    2 lines, poet B
    3 lines, poet A
    3 lines, poet B
    2 lines, poet A
    3 lines, poet B
  • 3 person pattern:
    3 lines, poet A
    2 lines, poet B
    3 lines, poet C
    2 lines, poet A
    3 lines, poet B
    2 lines, poet C
  • Recently, 6-person rengay have appeared in such journals as Sketchbook.

From conversations with Garry, I know that once having given birth to this new genre he is happy enough to watch its form evolve and become enriched by the imaginations of those who have taken it up. From his perspective, the two incontrovertible “rules” of rengay are (1) more than one participant, and (2) adherence to a theme. -- Carolyn Hall, Frogpond, 2007

Links:
http://www.nc-haiku.org/pdf/RengayWriting.pdf http://www.baymoon.com/~ariadne/form/rengay.htm

Be sure to visit Garry Gay's website of photo haiga: The Long Way Home

Saturday, January 20, 2007

a discussion on punning

The American poet Kenneth Rexroth, in his introduction to "One Hundred Poems from the Japanese, says:
The 'kake kotoba' or pivot word is a word or part of a word employed in two senses, or, very rarely, in three, one relating to what precedes, the other to what follows. It is a device not unknown to late Latin and it turns up now and then in English humor andf requently in James Joyce's "Finnegan's Wake." The word 'matsu', for example, is often used in the sense of 'pine' and 'long for' exactly as in the English 'pine' and 'pine.'. . .
See the rest of this discussion by Larry, Gabi Greve, and Sakuo Nakamura at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/happyhaiku/message/4000
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For more on Rexroth see: http://www.bopsecrets.org/rexroth/

Thursday, January 11, 2007

found along the way

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

surf log

  • HaikuOz, the journal of the Australian Haiku Society, announces a new international biannual haiku journal Chrysanthemum. Gabi Greve is one of these editors and will be translating English language submissions into German (Thank you Gabi san!) The listed URL does not work yet (site under construction).

    Chrysanthemum is an international internet magazine that will appear twice a year, and will showcase previously unpublished Haiku/Senryû, Tanka, Haibun, Essays and Interviews in German and English. Haiku/Senryû submitted in English will be translated into German, if not already accompanied by a German translation, which is welcome but not required. Tanka, Haibun, Essays and Interviews will appear only in their original language. Submissions in languages other than German or English are also welcome as long as as they are accompanied by a translation into German or English.
    Chrysanthemum welcomes work based both on traditional values as well as modern, innovative contributions in form and content, although there will be a special focus on innovative work of quality. Chrysanthemum hopes to achieve a connection between the heritage of the genre and the development and adaption in countries outside Japan.


  • A collection of English haiku on a Geocities-Japan site. 2004 11th Haiku Meeting: December 11, Moderator: Catherine Urquhart. I can't read the headers, but this series is worth a read.

  • From WorldKigoLibrary: SOME PHILOSOPHY AND PERSONAL NOTES ON HAIKU by Paul MacNeil, Florida, USA

    It is my conviction that much short poetry is mistakenly shared as "haiku." I ask rhetorically (and others have posed this long before me), "why call it haiku?" By this I mean, why call what you write "haiku" if not to acknowledge the tradition and philosophy of the "haiku" that is Japanese haiku? The differences of language and form are very well covered in an essay by a Japanese, Keiko Imaoka. Her writing has influenced me. http://epiphanous.org/mark/haiku/resources.html
    and Mark Alan Osterhaus:
    http://www.execpc.com/~ohaus/haiklink.htm
    Among others, look there for definitions by Barlow of Britain, Alexeyev of Russia, Mena, Missias, Higginson, Davidson, and Reichhold of the USA. At a website
    http://www2.ori.u-tokyo.ac.jp/~dhugal/haikuhome.html


  • From 5-7-5 to 8-8-8, Haiku Metrics and Issues of Emulation -- New Paradigms for Japanese and English Haiku Form by RICHARD GILBERT and JUDY YONEOKA
    Language Issues: Journal of the Foreign Language Education Center (vol. 1) Prefectural University of Kumamoto, Kumamoto (March 2000) Japan.
    An detailed linguistic analysis of Japanese -on and English syllabic metrics; heavy reading ~ Billie


Wednesday, January 03, 2007

found on the web

2001 Waka for Japan 2001

Poetry has its seed in the human heart and blossoms forth in innumerable leaves of words ... it is poetry which, with only a part of its power, moves heaven and earth, pacifies unseen gods and demons, reconciles men and women and calms the hearts of savage warriors.
Ki no Tsurayuki, Preface to the Kokinshû, Ninth Century

Tsurayuki's words, written over a thousand years ago, are the first description by a Japanese of waka. The word is made up of two parts: wa meaning 'Japanese' and ka meaning 'poem' or 'song'. It was probably coined at about the time Tsurayuki was writing as a way to distinguish the poetry written by the Japanese in their own language from that they read and wrote in Chinese - the source of much of Japan's poetic inspiration.

Saturday, December 16, 2006

new links

Washed ashore in today's websurf:


    • Haiku, Haibun, Haiga by Ray Rassmussen ~ Do not miss this site! Artistically, it is one of the best personal websites I've run across. Fresh, energetic writing from a master haijin. I especially recommend the haibun section (Rasmusen is webmaster of Contemporary Haibun Online). The links and didactic sections are worth the trip alone. The linked photo gallery is pure gravy. Enough raving, just go...
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    • a procession of ripples: an anthology of selected haiku ~ Laryalee Fraser has put together a collection of fine English language haiku from such notable haijin as: an'ya, Robert Wilson, Jane Reichhold, Mike Rehling, Lorin Ford, Carol Raisfeld ... The accompanying photography suggests the haiga tradition. Pure pleasure here. There is even a page that formats printouts for you!

Wednesday, December 13, 2006

Gabi Greve's Reference Library

Over a hundred key scholarly articles on haiku and related forms are preserved at Yahoo Groups Haiku Essays, collected by Gabi Greve. Many valuable links, lists.

Tuesday, December 12, 2006

kiku kigo and more...

Gabi Greve has sent me a link to her kigo discussion on kiku. There are many rich links and references there.
To collect the dew on the chrysanthemum petals and drink it would bring you long life (chooju).… As an auspicious symbol of long life (kisshoo monyoo) the chrysanthemum was used for many decoration, on embroydered kimono and as sweets (wagashi). The Chinese boy Kikujidoo drank the dew of the chrysanthemum and lived to gain immortality without ageing, or rather to the ripe age of 800 years. This legend was later incorporated into a famous Noh drama.

white chrysanthemum
, shiragiku
yellow chrysanthemum
, kigiku
fine weather to enjoy chrysanthemums
, kikubiyori
crowded chrysanthemums
, rangiku
home full of chrysanthemums
, kiku no yado
time for the chrysanthemums
, kikudoki
dew on chrysanthemums
, kiku no tsuyu
Long Life Chrysanthemum, Manjuugiku
"live to see 1000 generations," Chiyomigusa


Following a thread, I wound up at the Yahoo Group WorldKigoLibrary, an invaluable reading resource, also curated by Gabi. You don't need to be a member to access the messages. Especially noted:

A Conversation with the Poet Hoshinaga Fumio from Modern Haiku, 35:3, Autumn 2004, pp. 27-45.

.......
twenty billion light-years of perjury...your blood type is "B"

Blood type B is rare in Japan; Type A is happier, but Type B carries a sense of melancholy.

blood type A
why am I unhappy
winter sparrow
..........--Billie Dee

See also Hoshinaga Fumio:Selected Haiku from Kumaso-Ha from the same issue, pp. 46-55

..........the spring tree--
..........I climb until I can
..........see the war

Arigatougozaimasu Gabi sensei! (((

Wednesday, November 01, 2006

haiku of Hashimoto Takako

Noted in the World Haiku Review archives:

Toward the Starry Sky: the haiku of Hashimoto Takako (1899 - 1963) by Debra Woolard Bender with Eiko Yachimoto, from a series on women poets of Japan.

An excerpt:

hoshizora e mise yori ringo afure ori

From the grocer's, a heap of apples
overflows to the starry sky.

Apples
.....from the grocer's heap tumble
........................... ...into starry skies.

This successful and famous haiku has been highly praised and loved ever since Takako composed it in 1947. A heap of red apples placed at the storefront, sparkling under incandescent lights relate, on a symphonic scale, to a myriad stars. Even though apples were a popular symbol of hope in the post-war chaos and hunger, Takako's clarity is reminiscent of Miyazawa Kenji with his hard and lofty imagism. As in the firefly haiku, her deeply suppressed boyishness can be sensed here, too, and her inner child appears to have survived. In her mature womanhood, she would write many sensual, or even sexy haiku which some call "ecstasy haiku"


The article and companion translations are highly recommended.

~ Billie

Monday, October 30, 2006

Tanka in English ~ M. Kei

.M. Kei has announced his Bibliography of Books Containing Tanka in English, an online posting comprised of over 300 titles. An important resource for the serious waka student. This is an ongoing project, so check back periodically.
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Other M. Kei links:

M. Kei's personal poetry blog, with explanations and examples of various forms and traditions: <http://kujakupoet.blogspot.com/> worthwhile browsing here

Editor, Fire Pearls: Short Masterpieces of the Human Heart <
http://www.lulu.com/firepearls>

Moderator for Kyoka Mad Poems -- humorous tanka -- <
http://groups.google.com/group/kyoka> try your hand at one of these -- not as easy as it looks!

Co-Manager for Tanka Roundtable discussion group <
http://groups.google.com/group/tankaroundtable> you need to join this google-group to peruse

Editor of the Chesapeake Bay Saijiki (haiku almanac) project at Worldkigo <
http://worldkigodatabase.blogspot.com/2005/03/chesapeake-bay.html> browse through the World Kigo Database while you're there

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Be sure to check out the many other resources at Tanka Central - the megasite for English language tanka.